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09.03.09(no subject)
Borrowed from [info]redbrunja. This is soo my type of meme! Though, instead of hunting down my favorites, I just went with 10 books that were already in my room 'cause I'm lazy.

1. Pick 10 of your favorite books or series.
2. Post the first sentence of each book. (If one sentence seems too short, post two or three!)
3. Let everyone try to guess the titles and authors of your books.



1. "Serene was a word you could put to Brooklyn, New York. Especially in the summer of 1912." A Tree Grows In Brooklyn by Betty Smith Guessed by [info]a_lifestyle

2. "About thirty years ago, Miss Maria Ward, of Huntingtondon, with only seven thousand pounds, had the good luck to captivate Sir Thomas Bertram, of Mansfield Park, in the county of Northampton, and to be thereby raised to the rank of a baronet's lady, with all the comforts and consequences of an handsome house and large income." Mansfield Park by Jane Austen Guessed by [info]cynchick

3. "My first regret, upon successfully cruising through admission to a local public high shool, was that the school was situated atop a rather sizeable hill."

4."This is a tale of a meeting of two lonesome, skinny, fairly old white men on a planet which was dying fast."

5. "Mariam was five years old the first time she heard the word harami"

6. "Suppose that you and I were sitting in a quiet room overlooking a garden and sipping at our cups of green tea while we talked about something that had happened  a long while ago, and I said to you, "That afternoon when I met so-and-so... was the very best afternoon of my life, and also the very worst afternoon." Memoirs of a Geisha by Arthur Golden Guessed by [info]cynchick

7. "Buck Mulligan came from the stairhead, bearing a bowl of lather on which a mirror and a razor lay crossed." Ulysses by James Joyce Guessed by [info]a_lifestyle

8. "My name is Kathy H. I'm thirty-one years old, and I've been a carer now for over eleven years. That sounds long enough, I know, but actually they want me to go on for another eight months, until the end of this year." Never Let Me Go by Kazuo Ishiguro Guessed by [info]leafygirl

9. "The boy lay prone in the grass, his chin resting on his hands. He suddenly found himself overwhelmed by a heightened awareness of the tangled stems and roots, a forest in microcosm, a transfigured world of ants and beetles and even -- though he wouldn't have known the details at the time -- of soil bacteria by the billions, silently and invisibly shoring up the economy of the micro-world."

10. "Through the fence, between the curling flower spaces, I could see them hitting."

ETA: Don't you think that #3 sounds strangely familiar?
08.10.09 - Shipwreck
I went with a coworker to see Shakespeare's Pericles tonight and was very disappointed.

incest, riddle, shipwreck, love, shipwreck, reanimation, time-skip, attmepted murder, pirates, etc. )

I also finally got my fifteen-pound Norton Anthology of Shakespeare out of storage. I think I'll make it my goal to read all of his plays between books from my other reading list.

The Complete Works )
I've decided to attempt to read Time's 100 Best English Language Novels over the next year.

The List... )

So a couple questions for my F-list:

Have you read any of these books, and if so, what did you think about them?

Do you want to read any one in particular? If you want, I would love to book club it.

Very, very few amateur writers can do one thing successfully: begin a story with a description of the setting. And when writers do decide to try this (either because of bravery or ignorance) it tends to come off as hackneyed and immature.

A quick read through of the first paragraphs of twenty or so stories of ff.net showed me that most people are aware of this and are careful to differ describing the setting until later in their story. Instead, they begin with a bit of dialogue (“Kakashi,’s late again,” Shizune muttered looking down at Ton Ton, “I hope Lady Tsunada’s taking it well.”) or an introduction to their main character and the premise ("A certain silver-haired Jounin stirred in his sleep").

Both of those methods are good fall backs. But an excellent writer doesn't back down from a challenge. For instance, the following example is the beginning of Graham Greene's The Power and the Glory :

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Good huh? Notice the way the setting was used to establish tone- the man alienated in a hostile environment.

One more example from the beginning of Rachel Cusk's Arlington Road:

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Personification, repetition, metaphor and she even wrote about the weather without it seeming ridiculously typical.

THE CHALLENGE: Write the beginning of a story in which you immediately establish the setting. Keep it fresh, original, and make the reader want to keep reading once you're finished.

It doesn't have to be fandom and it can be as long or short as you want. Just make sure you post a link in the comments when you're done.





07.23.09 - cold compress?
Kakashi
I think redundant and esoteric are ironic words.

Look at this freaking icon!

( I have an extremely high fever, literally).
07.19.09 - Catharsis
map
Dear you,

I'm going to go and have an adventure no matter what you try to do to stop me.

love,
me

p.s. Be nicer if you want me to come back some day.
poision
I issue a challenge to authors. The goal is to make yourself uncomfortable and to be uninhibitedly courageous in your writing.

Write me a drabble about a scene you would normally gloss over because you cannot bear to put it into detail or because you are worried it will make people cringe. Those things you typically only devote a couple of lines to and then cut to the next scene. Your character getting sick in the back alley of a bar, the stages of that autopsy, what else really happens immediately after a baby is born, how one goes about using the bathroom in the woods.

Don't avoid the unpleasant here, take it on head first in as much detail as you can stand.

Please don't think I am promoting gore. The latter examples are merely things I would avoid discussing in my own stories. But I think part of writing courageously is sometimes going past the limits that your perceive to be there.

Post them in the comments below or leave a link. Anonymous is fine.

Inspired by the famous root canal scene in James Frey's A Million Little Pieces. (Screw you Oprah!)
05.19.09 - contest results
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The results are in for The Kakashi X Sakura FC 'classy' fanart contest!

To view all of the beautiful entries please visit the voting thread.

In first place and winner of a oneshot by [info]sakuraharu is Leona 101 with her entry Alain Chatier
In second place and winner of a oneshot by [info]zelha is Cynchick with her entry Aftermath.

In the interest of due dilligence, I'd like to make public the contest's scores and calculations:
SCORING CALCULATIONS AND RESULTS
COMPOSITE JUDGING SCORE CONVERTED JUDGING SCORE COMPOSITE VOTING SCORE CONVERTED VOTING SCORE C.J.S+C.V.S. TOTAL
Greatest possible score 250 50 76 50 50+50 100
BREAKDOWN 159.5 31.9 1 .66 31.9+.66 32.56
CYNCHICK 230.5 46.1 26 17.11 46.1+17.11 63.21
GOLDENGRIMOIRE 178 35.6 0 0 35.6+0 35.6
KAGURA-SATOAM 206 41.2 7 4.61 41.2+4.61 45.81
LEONA101 244 48.8 34 22.37 48.8+22.37 71.17
SAPHRI 201 40.2 2 1.32 40.2+1.32 41.52
SCARYREI 158 31.6 3 1.97 31.6+1.97 33.57
SHINOBUNIN 194 38.8 3 1.97 38.8+1.97 40.77
YOROKOBI21 149 29.8 0 0 29.8+-0 29.8



Sorry, I'll put it under a cut as soon as I figure out how.
Thank you to all nine participants and all four judges. Also thank you to those who cast a vote in the voting thread.
05.16.09 - Ulysses
You are not lost
I have been kind of freaking out as my (probably) imminent departure to Japan gets closer. In some way I keep trying to talk myself out of it. There are a million reasons I shouldn't go, from my finances to my poor Japanese. And yet, for some reason I feel like I'll regret it if I don't. Ulysses always makes me feel brave, so here it is.

Ulysses
by Alfred Lord Tennyson

It little profits that an idle king,
By this still hearth, among these barren crags,
Matched with an aged wife, I mete and dole
Unequal laws unto a savage race,
That hoard, and sleep, and feed, and know not me.

I cannot rest from travel: I will drink
Life to the lees: all times I have enjoyed
Greatly, have suffered greatly, both with those
That loved me, and alone; on shore, and when
Through scudding drifts the rainy Hyades
Vext the dim sea: I am become a name;
For always roaming with a hungry heart
Much have I seen and known; cities of men
And manners, climates, councils, governments,
Myself not least, but honoured of them all;
And drunk delight of battle with my peers;
Far on the ringing plains of windy Troy.
I am part of all that I have met;
Yet all experience is an arch wherethrough
Gleams that untravelled world, whose margin fades
For ever and for ever when I move.
How dull it is to pause, to make an end,
To rust unburnished, not to shine in use!
As though to breath were life. Life piled on life
Were all to little, and of one to me
Little remains: but every hour is saved
From that eternal silence, something more,
A bringer of new things; and vile it were
For some three suns to store and hoard myself,
And this gray spirit yearning in desire
To follow knowledge like a sinking star,
Beyond the utmost bound of human thought.

This is my son, mine own Telemachus,
To whom I leave the scepter and the isle
Well-loved of me, discerning to fulfill
This labour, by slow prudence to make mild
A rugged people, and through soft degrees
Subdue them to the useful and the good.
Most blameless is he, centered in the sphere
Of common duties, decent not to fail
In offices of tenderness, and pay
Meet adoration to my household gods,
When I am gone. He works his work, I mine.

There lies the port; the vessel puffs her sail:
There gloom the dark broad seas. My mariners,
Souls that have toiled, and wrought, and thought with me
That ever with a frolic welcome took
The thunder and the sunshine, and opposed
Free hearts, free foreheads you and I are old;
Old age had yet his honour and his toil;
Death closes all: but something ere the end,
Some work of noble note, may yet be done,
Not unbecoming men that strove with Gods.
The lights begin to twinkle from the rocks:
The long day wanes: the slow moon climbs: the deep
Moans round with many voices. Come, my friends,
'Tis not too late to seek a newer world.
Push off, and sitting well in order smite
The sounding furrows; for my purpose holds
To sail beyond the sunset, and the baths
Of all the western stars, until I die.
It may be that the gulfs will wash us down:
It may be we shall touch the Happy Isles,
And see the great Achilles, whom we knew.
Though much is taken, much abides; and though
We are not now that strength which in the old days
Moved earth and heaven; that which we are, we are,
One equal-temper of heroic hearts,
Made weak by time and fate, but strong in will
To strive, to seek, to find, and not to yield.
typewritter
A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus:

1. What am I trying to say?
2. What words will express it?
3. What image or idiom will make it clearer?
4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?

-George Orwell


Blahahahagh! I think I have swine flu. Or, if not, whatever I have is just terrible. I feel horrendous.

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